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@amyleadem amyleadem commented Nov 18, 2022

Summary

Updated template copy in the 404 templates to follow parallel structure and use active voice.

This PR pulls in the copy update established in uswds/uswds-site#1802 (English) and #5060 (Spanish). This PR is an extension of original issue #4225.

Thanks to @ybom for the Spanish translation!

Breaking

This is not a breaking change, but sites that use the 404 template copy should update.

Related issue

Closes: #4980

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  1. Evaluate if the Spanish version of the template needs similar updates DONE
  2. Once this change is released, we should merge USWDS-Site - 404: Update template screenshots  uswds-site#1923 into uswds-site.

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@amyleadem amyleadem changed the title USWDS - 404 error template: Update copy USWDS - 404 error template: Plain language Nov 18, 2022
@amyleadem amyleadem changed the title USWDS - 404 error template: Plain language USWDS - 404 error template: Update sentence structure Nov 23, 2022
@amyleadem amyleadem marked this pull request as ready for review November 28, 2022 17:59
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A thing of beauty!

@amyleadem amyleadem marked this pull request as draft December 19, 2022 21:56
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Converting to draft so that we can incorporate the Spanish language edits.

@amyleadem amyleadem marked this pull request as ready for review December 19, 2022 23:00
@amyleadem amyleadem requested a review from mejiaj December 19, 2022 23:00
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@mejiaj I updated the Spanish template to include the recommended copy. Can you confirm that it reads as expected?

@amyleadem amyleadem added this to the uswds 3.4.0 milestone Dec 21, 2022
@mejiaj mejiaj removed this from the uswds 3.4.0 milestone Jan 26, 2023
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mejiaj commented Jan 26, 2023

Removing from 3.4.0 milestone because the issue #4980 is already linked.

@thisisdano thisisdano merged commit d72b0e4 into develop Feb 28, 2023
@thisisdano thisisdano deleted the al-404-copy branch February 28, 2023 19:13
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USWDS - 404 error template: Update sentence structure
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