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A guide of how to provision and manage DNS certificates in Istio.

Please provide a description for what this PR is for: istio/istio#17061.

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/test lint_istio.io

@lei-tang lei-tang force-pushed the webhook-config branch 2 times, most recently from 834ec2e to 694be46 Compare October 16, 2019 19:54
for evaluation purposes only.
{{< /warning >}}

This task shows how to provision and manage DNS certificates in Istio.
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Can you explain why a user would want to do this? This seems more like an implementation detail to me than a task?

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Done: added the explanation.

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@istio/wg-docs-maintainers-english All review comments have been addressed, can you approve the PR?


## Before you begin

* Create a new Kubernetes cluster to run the example in this tutorial.
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No need for a bullet since there's only a single paragraph in this section.

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Done.

contains an example DNS certificate configuration. Install Istio with the DNS certificate configuration
using [Helm](/docs/setup/install/helm/#prerequisites):

{{< text bash >}}
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Done.

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Still looks indented...

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Please ensure readers can run all commands successfully.

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@rcaballeromx This feature is for Istio with version >= 1.4. Readers can run all commands successfully on Istio with version >= 1.4. The user guide will not be cherrypicked to older Istio versions (e.g., 1.3, 1.2, etc)

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@rcaballeromx Per the discussion, the installation step is removed to decouple the installation from the user guide. Please take a look.

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Overall LGTM. I only have some nitpicks.

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## Before you begin

* Create a Kubernetes cluster with Istio installed and the DNS certificate configuration
in [`values-istio-dns-cert.yaml`]({{< github_file >}}/install/kubernetes/helm/istio/example-values/values-istio-dns-cert.yaml).
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I don't know how to apply the values-istio-dns-cert.yaml. Can you put the installation instructions here if it's not described in /docs/setup/install?

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Or whatever instruction that can help me to understand how to apply the values-istio-dns-cert.yaml file :)

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The values-istio-dns-cert.yaml can be applied through helm. The instructions are in the original commit 04ea12c. Based on the discussion with Rigs, the installation instructions are decoupled from the user guide as applying a helm value in the installation is covered in the installation guides.

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I think it's hard to follow from a user's perspective. I'm not seeing a clear instruction around using "--values" to apply custom yaml files.
@rcaballeromx Hi Rigs, shall we add a tab in
https://preliminary.istio.io/docs/setup/install/helm/#option-1-install-with-helm-via-helm-template
for applying custom yaml files in helm? Otherwise I think our users will have difficulties applying the values-istio-dns-cert.yaml to helm. WDYT?

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For CNI, I had added a new tab titled Istio CNI enabled. The equivalent here would be to add a DNS certificates tab? I'm on the fence whether that should be exposed so prominently in the main Helm install page.

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In the installation page, can we add a tab called "custom helm", and have:

$ helm template install/kubernetes/helm/istio --name istio --namespace istio-system \
    --values ${CUSTOM_HELM} | kubectl apply -f -

and we can ask user to set the following here:

CUSTOM_HELM=/install/kubernetes/helm/istio/example-values/values-istio-dns-cert.yaml

and point them to the "custom helm" tab?

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Followed the same approach of Istio CNI: added a "DNS certificates" tab and refer to the tab in the user guide. @rcaballeromx, @rlenglet, @myidpt, please take a look.

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Thanks Lei. That works, although I preferred to add a tab of "custom helm" to cover all these use cases.

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@lei-tang @rlenglet @myidpt I agree that the readers need to learn, either as the first steps of the procedure or under the "Before you begin" section, how to apply the configuration needed for the DNS certs.
That said, I agree with @rlenglet adding more complexity to our installation story is definitely not the way to go.
@myidpt @lei-tang Can you help me understand why the configuration file cannot be applied on an exisiting Istio deployment? Can we move away from adding new configuration profiles to the Helm installation instead of figuring out how to enable security features on existing deployments?
Please assume that readers have an existing deployment they installed using the default configuration profile when they start going through the steps.
What configuration do readers need to apply? How? When should they apply it? Before they begin? At the beginning of enabling the feature? After they have made some other changes to the mesh?


## DNS certificate provisioning and management

You can configure the DNS names and secret names for the DNS certificates
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In what cases does the user configure the DNS names and secret names? If it's not needed in the default use cases, maybe we should put this section and the "Configure DNS certificates" section to the end?

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This is explained in the beginning of the guide as follows:
By default, the DNS certificates of Galley and Sidecar
Injector are provisioned and managed by Citadel, which is a large component
that maintains its own signing key and also acts as a CA for Istio.
This task shows how to provision and manage DNS certificates in Istio through
a lightweight component (called Chiron), which signs certificates
using Kubernetes CA APIs without maintaining its own private key.

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@lei-tang I agree with @myidpt. Readers need to know what are the scenarios that require them to use DNS names and secret names. I do agree that readers need that information at the start of the task.
However, your introduction is not effectively conveying that information. Please see my comments about it.
Beyond that, the text in this paragraph is unnecessarily complex, see my suggestions.

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You can configure the DNS names and secret names for the DNS certificates
Istio can provision the DNS names and secret names for the DNS certificates based on a configuration you provide.

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What is this JavaScript here for? This doesn't seem right at all.

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This seems to be the same trick I did for CNI. When linking from another page, if the URL ends with e.g. #cni, it switches to a particular tab on the page. So it's less confusing for viewers.

This Javascript is fine, but it must be merged into the JS function above or it will break the functionality for CNI as it is.

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Done: it has been merged into the JS function above.

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@geeknoid @rlenglet please take another look.

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The empty div tag is added to fix the lint error.

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The Javascript snippet is breaking the #cni hash. It must be integrated into the existing window.unload function.

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This seems to be the same trick I did for CNI. When linking from another page, if the URL ends with e.g. #cni, it switches to a particular tab on the page. So it's less confusing for viewers.

This Javascript is fine, but it must be merged into the JS function above or it will break the functionality for CNI as it is.

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- ./public/docs/tasks/security/dns-cert/index.html
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The Javascript code is fixed.

{{< /text >}}

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{{< /tabset >}}

### Option 2: Install with Helm and Tiller via `helm install`
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We've deprecated helm installation instructions for 1.4, so this section can go I think.

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Done: changed to use istioctl to install Istio.

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I'd like this to be removed please.

The intent with the tabs is that they are sticky. The user sets them and they will remain set that way whenever the user visits the page. This overriding behavior is counter to that.

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Done: removed all changes in this file.


## Before you begin

* Install Istio through `istioctl` with DNS certificates configured.
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Does enabling this feature require a reinstall of Istio? Perhaps a note would be appropriate then?

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Done: added a note.

in [`values-istio-dns-cert.yaml`]({{< github_file >}}/install/kubernetes/helm/istio/example-values/values-istio-dns-cert.yaml).
Refer to the [Customizable Install with Helm](/docs/setup/install/helm/#dnscerts) for complete instructions.

* Install [`jq`](https://stedolan.github.io/jq/) for JSON parsing.
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Instaling this tool is strictly for the purpose of validating the setup, right? Then lets tell this to the reader.


## Check the provision of DNS certificates

Previously, we learned how to configure Istio to generate DNS certificates and store them in secrets
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Previously? On a different page? If so, this should be a link and not use the word "Previously", users aren't linearly reading our docs.

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Done: revised.

contains an example DNS certificate configuration. Install Istio with the DNS certificate configuration
using [Helm](/docs/setup/install/helm/#prerequisites):

{{< text bash >}}
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Still looks indented...


The text output should include:

{{< text plain >}}
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Remove indent of this block.

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Done: indent removed.

DNS:istio-galley.istio-system.svc, DNS:istio-galley.istio-system
{{< /text >}}

## Congratulations
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This is not a contest, let's just remove this whole section.

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Done.


## Cleanup

After completing this tutorial, you may delete the testing cluster created
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No cluster was created above.

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Removed this section.

## Cleanup

After completing this tutorial, you may delete the testing cluster created
at the beginning of this tutorial.
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at the beginning of this tutorial.
at the beginning of this task.

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This seciton is removed.

{{< /text >}}

1. To check that Istio regenerated the deleted DNS certificate, and that the certificate
contains the configured DNS names, we need to get the secret from Kubernetes, parse it, decode it,
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contains the configured DNS names, we need to get the secret from Kubernetes, parse it, decode it,
contains the configured DNS names, you need to get the secret from Kubernetes, parse it, decode it,

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Done.

## Regenerate a DNS certificate

Istio can also regenerate DNS certificates that were mistakenly deleted. Next,
we delete a certificate we recently configured and verify that Istio regenerates it automatically.
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we delete a certificate we recently configured and verify that Istio regenerates it automatically.
we show how you can delete a recently configured certificate and verify Istio regenerates it automatically.

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Done.

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@geeknoid I have added an explanation of why a user would want to do this guide. Please take another look.

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Should this be under the new citadel-config sub-folder? https://preliminary.istio.io/docs/tasks/security/citadel-config/
If this replaces Citadel, I think we could say this is "configuring Citadel to be disabled", so it belongs in the sub-folder.

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This feature is orthogonal to Citadel; Citadel can exist as is, e.g., signing workload certificates, etc.

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In that case I guess it belongs where you have it. That it's unrelated to Citadel deployment, however, is not clear from the text. You list its advantage as being light weight, compared to Citadel, but that's irrelevant if you need to deploy Citadel as well anyway. So this is only used for the webhooks, while Citadel continues to provide certificates for workloads? You should explain this a little more clearly in the overview.

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There are users that do not use Citadel but their own CA to sign workload certificates. For such users, they can use Chiron, instead of Citadel, to provision DNS certificates for their control plane components, which is more lightweight than Citadel.

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Added an explanation that this is to provision and manage DNS certificates for Istio control
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This raises the architectural question about whether Citadel needs to support provisioning DNS certs at all. If Chiron is there, why not always use that and remove that functionality from Citadel?

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That is the plan. This feature is alpha, so the current default behavior remains unchanged. After this feature graduates as beta, it will become the default and the corresponding functionality will be removed from Citadel.

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This raises the architectural question about whether Citadel needs to support provisioning DNS certs at all. If Chiron is there, why not always use that and remove that functionality from Citadel?

By default, the DNS certificates used by the webhooks of Galley and the sidecar
injector are provisioned and managed by Citadel, which is a large component
that maintains its own signing key and also acts as a CA for Istio.
This task shows how to provision and manage DNS certificates for Istio control
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In certain deployments, you may want to use your own certificate authority instead of Citadel. In those cases, Citadel ends up being used strictly for its DNS certificate provisioning functionality. Rather than having to deploy Citadel at all in this case, you can instead leverage Chiron, a lightweight component that signs certificates using the Kubernetes CA APIs without maintaining its own private key.

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Done.

using Kubernetes CA APIs without maintaining its own private key.
Using this feature has the following advantages:

* No dependency on Citadel for DNS certificates and is more lightweight than Citadel.
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* No dependency on Citadel for DNS certificates and is more lightweight than Citadel.
* More lightweight than Citadel.

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Done.


## Before you begin

* Install Istio through `istioctl` with DNS certificates configured. This feature requires Istio 1.4+ and
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This doc set is for 1.4, so no need to mention the version requirement.

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Done.


## DNS certificate provisioning and management

Istio can provision the DNS names and secret names for the DNS certificates based on a configuration you provide.
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Istio can provision the DNS names and secret names for the DNS certificates based on a configuration you provide.
Istio provisions the DNS names and secret names for the DNS certificates based on configuration you provide.

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Done.

names in a certificate and the `secretName` field specifies the name of the Kubernetes secret used to
store the certificate and the key.

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## Check the provision of DNS certificates
## Check the provisioning of DNS certificates

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## Check the provision of DNS certificates

After configuring Istio to generate DNS certificates and store them in secrets
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After configuring Istio to generate DNS certificates and store them in secrets
After configuring Istio to generate DNS certificates and storing them in secrets

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Done.

## Check the provision of DNS certificates

After configuring Istio to generate DNS certificates and store them in secrets
of our choosing, we verify that the certificates were provisioned and work properly.
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of our choosing, we verify that the certificates were provisioned and work properly.
of your choosing, you can verify that the certificates were provisioned and work properly.

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Done.

of our choosing, we verify that the certificates were provisioned and work properly.

To check that Istio generated the `dns.istio-galley-service-account` DNS certificate as configured in the example,
and that the certificate contains the configured DNS names, we need to get the secret from Kubernetes, parse it,
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and that the certificate contains the configured DNS names, we need to get the secret from Kubernetes, parse it,
and that the certificate contains the configured DNS names, you need to get the secret from Kubernetes, parse it,

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Done.

DNS:istio-galley.istio-system.svc, DNS:istio-galley.istio-system
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## Regenerate a DNS certificate
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## Regenerate a DNS certificate
## Regenerating a DNS certificate

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Done.


## Configure DNS certificates

The [`values-istio-dns-cert.yaml`]({{< github_file >}}/install/kubernetes/helm/istio/example-values/values-istio-dns-cert.yaml)
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This is strange. The values-istio-dns-cert.yaml file doesn't seem to have anything to do with this task. Shouldn't it be referring to the IstioControlPlane CR above?

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The [`values-istio-dns-cert.yaml`]({{< github_file >}}/install/kubernetes/helm/istio/example-values/values-istio-dns-cert.yaml)
The `IstioControlPlane` custom resource used to configure Istio in the `istioctl manifest apply` command, above,

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Revised accordingly.

## Configure DNS certificates

The [`values-istio-dns-cert.yaml`]({{< github_file >}}/install/kubernetes/helm/istio/example-values/values-istio-dns-cert.yaml)
YAML file contains an example DNS certificate configuration. Within, the `dnsNames` field specifies the DNS
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contains an example DNS certificate configuration. Within, the `dnsNames` field specifies the DNS

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Revised accordingly.

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