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@Previewable @State var task = Todo(name: "Some task") | ||
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EditTaskNameView(task: task) | ||
} |
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Code Review for EditTaskNameView.swift
1. Use of @Environment(\.presentationMode)
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Issue: The
@Environment(\.presentationMode)
property wrapper is deprecated in newer versions of SwiftUI. -
Suggestion: Replace it with
@Environment(\.dismiss)
which provides a more modern and straightforward way to dismiss views.@Environment(\.dismiss) private var dismiss
Then, update the dismiss action accordingly:
Button("OK") { dismiss() }
2. Handling of @Bindable
with Todo
Model
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Issue: The use of
@Bindable
suggests thatTodo
is a data model conforming to necessary protocols for binding. Ensure thatTodo
conforms toObservableObject
or is appropriately managed bySwiftData
. -
Suggestion: If
Todo
isn't already conforming, consider addingObservableObject
conformance and marking relevant properties with@Published
.class Todo: ObservableObject { @Published var name: String // Other properties and initializers }
3. NavigationView Usage
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Issue: Embedding a
NavigationView
within a view that's likely to be presented inside anotherNavigationView
can lead to nested navigation bars, which may cause UI inconsistencies. -
Suggestion: Remove the internal
NavigationView
and assume thatEditTaskNameView
is presented within an existing navigation context. This allows for better flexibility and prevents potential UI issues.var body: some View { VStack { // Existing content } .padding() .toolbar { // Toolbar items } }
4. Toolbar Placement and Accessibility
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Issue: The
ToolbarItem
uses.primaryAction
placement. Ensure that this placement behaves as expected across different devices and orientations. -
Suggestion: Confirm the UI on multiple device types. Additionally, consider adding accessibility labels to the button for better support.
ToolbarItem(placement: .navigationBarTrailing) { Button("OK") { dismiss() } .accessibilityLabel("Confirm task name") }
5. Validation and Save Mechanism
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Issue: The "OK" button currently only dismisses the view without validating the input or saving changes explicitly. This might lead to unintended behaviors if
Todo
requires explicit save actions. -
Suggestion: Implement validation logic to ensure the task name isn't empty or doesn't contain invalid characters. Additionally, handle the save operation if necessary.
Button("OK") { if !task.name.trimmingCharacters(in: .whitespaces).isEmpty { // Save changes if needed dismiss() } else { // Provide user feedback for invalid input } } .disabled(task.name.trimmingCharacters(in: .whitespaces).isEmpty)
6. Focus Management
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Issue: The
.task
modifier is used to set the focus when the view appears. While functional, ensure that this behavior is consistently triggered and doesn't interfere with other focus states. -
Suggestion: Alternatively, use
.onAppear
for setting the initial focus, which might be more predictable..onAppear { self.focusField = .taskName }
7. Preview Configuration
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Issue: The preview uses
@Previewable
, which isn't a standard SwiftUI property wrapper. This might be a typo. -
Suggestion: Replace
@Previewable
with@State
if the intention is to have a mutable state within the preview.#Preview { @State var task = Todo(name: "Some task") EditTaskNameView(task: task) }
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Additional Note: Ensure that the
Todo
initializer matches the actual implementation in your model.
8. File Header Date
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Issue: The file header indicates a creation date of "21.05.2025," which is in the future.
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Suggestion: Update the date to reflect the actual creation date to maintain accurate file metadata.
// Created by Andrey Mikhaylin on <Actual Date>.
9. Enhanced User Experience
-
Suggestion: To improve UX, consider adding a
Cancel
button alongside theOK
button to allow users to dismiss the view without saving changes..toolbar { ToolbarItem(placement: .cancellationAction) { Button("Cancel") { dismiss() } } ToolbarItem(placement: .navigationBarTrailing) { Button("OK") { // Save and dismiss dismiss() } .disabled(task.name.trimmingCharacters(in: .whitespaces).isEmpty) } }
10. Accessibility and Localization
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Suggestion: Ensure that all user-facing strings are localized using
LocalizedStringKey
or similar mechanisms. Additionally, verify that the view is accessible, with proper labels and supports Dynamic Type.TextField("Task", text: $task.name) .focused($focusField, equals: .taskName) .accessibilityLabel("Task Name") Button("OK") { /* ... */ } .accessibilityLabel("Confirm Task Name")
Summary
The EditTaskNameView
is a solid foundation for editing a task's name. Addressing the points above will enhance the code's modernity, reliability, and user experience. Ensuring proper state management, validation, and adherence to SwiftUI best practices will make the view more robust and maintainable.
@@ -1807,7 +1811,7 @@ | |||
buildSettings = { | |||
BUNDLE_LOADER = "$(TEST_HOST)"; | |||
CODE_SIGN_STYLE = Automatic; | |||
CURRENT_PROJECT_VERSION = 33; | |||
CURRENT_PROJECT_VERSION = 35; | |||
DEAD_CODE_STRIPPING = YES; | |||
GENERATE_INFOPLIST_FILE = YES; | |||
MACOSX_DEPLOYMENT_TARGET = 14.0; |
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Pull Request Review
Thank you for submitting the changes. Here's a detailed review focusing on potential issues and areas for improvement:
1. Addition of EditTaskNameView.swift
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Comprehensive Integration:
- Build File References: You've correctly added
EditTaskNameView.swift
to thePBXBuildFile
andPBXFileReference
sections, ensuring it's recognized by the build system. - Build Phases Inclusion: The file is appropriately included in the relevant build phases (
Tasks
group), ensuring it's compiled and linked as part of the target.
- Build File References: You've correctly added
-
Suggestions:
- Verify File Paths: Ensure that the path specified (
<group>
) accurately reflects the file's location within your project directory structure. Misaligned paths can lead to build issues. - Bundle Resources: If
EditTaskNameView.swift
depends on any resources (e.g., assets, storyboards), ensure they're also included in the appropriate build phases. - Code Review: While the addition in the project file is correct, make sure that the Swift file itself adheres to your project's coding standards and passes all relevant tests.
- Verify File Paths: Ensure that the path specified (
2. Incrementing CURRENT_PROJECT_VERSION
from 33 to 35
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Consistency Across Configurations:
- You've consistently updated the
CURRENT_PROJECT_VERSION
across multiple build configurations, which is excellent for maintaining version alignment throughout the project.
- You've consistently updated the
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Suggestions:
-
Versioning Strategy:
- Semantic Versioning: If not already implemented, consider adopting Semantic Versioning for clearer version management. This involves incrementing major, minor, and patch versions based on the nature of changes.
- Skipping Versions: Notably, version 34 is skipped in this update. Ensure that this is intentional. Skipping versions can lead to confusion unless there's a specific reason (e.g., reserving for a particular release).
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Automation:
- Automate Version Management: Manually updating project versions across multiple configurations can be error-prone. Consider using scripts or tools (like Fastlane or custom shell scripts) to automate version bumps. This ensures consistency and reduces the risk of missing a configuration.
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Documentation:
- Changelog Updates: Ensure that the version increment is reflected in your project's changelog or release notes. This aids in tracking changes and communicating updates to stakeholders or users.
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3. Project File Management
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Direct Editing Risks:
- Manual Edits: The changes appear to be directly made to the project file (
project.pbxproj
). While necessary at times, manual editing can risk introducing syntax errors or misconfigurations.
- Manual Edits: The changes appear to be directly made to the project file (
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Suggestions:
- Use Xcode for Modifications: Whenever possible, make such additions or changes through Xcode's interface. Xcode handles the intricacies of the project file structure, minimizing the risk of errors.
- Version Control Best Practices:
- Atomic Commits: Ensure that changes to project files are part of atomic commits that correspond to specific feature additions or fixes. This makes tracking and reverting changes easier if issues arise.
- Code Review for Project Files: Given their complexity, ensure that project file changes are thoroughly reviewed to prevent build issues.
4. General Best Practices
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Code Signing & Entitlements:
- Consistency Check: You've updated the
CODE_SIGN_ENTITLEMENTS
andCODE_SIGN_STYLE
consistently. Verify that the entitlements files linked (PomPadDo.mobile/PomPadDo_mobile.entitlements
, etc.) are correctly configured and contain the necessary permissions for the app's functionality.
- Consistency Check: You've updated the
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Deployment Targets:
- iOS and macOS Targets: Ensure that the deployment targets (
IPHONEOS_DEPLOYMENT_TARGET = 18.1;
,MACOSX_DEPLOYMENT_TARGET = 14.0;
) are compatible with your app's requirements and the latest supported OS versions.
- iOS and macOS Targets: Ensure that the deployment targets (
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Asset Management:
- Global Accent Color: The
ASSETCATALOG_COMPILER_GLOBAL_ACCENT_COLOR_NAME = AccentColor;
is correctly set. Ensure that theAccentColor
asset exists and is defined appropriately in your asset catalogs.
- Global Accent Color: The
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Hardening Runtime:
- Security Enhancements: Enabling
ENABLE_HARDENED_RUNTIME = YES;
is a good practice for enhancing app security. However, ensure that all third-party libraries and dependencies are compatible with the hardened runtime to prevent build or runtime issues.
- Security Enhancements: Enabling
5. Final Recommendations
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Testing:
- Build Verification: After these changes, perform a clean build to ensure that the project compiles without errors. Pay special attention to the newly added
EditTaskNameView.swift
and verify its functionality within the app. - Automated Tests: Run your suite of automated tests to confirm that existing functionalities remain unaffected by these changes.
- Build Verification: After these changes, perform a clean build to ensure that the project compiles without errors. Pay special attention to the newly added
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Continuous Integration (CI):
- CI Pipeline Updates: If you use a CI system, ensure that it pulls the latest
CURRENT_PROJECT_VERSION
and that tests are passing with the updated configurations.
- CI Pipeline Updates: If you use a CI system, ensure that it pulls the latest
By addressing the points above, you can enhance the stability, maintainability, and scalability of your project. Let me know if you need further assistance or specific insights on any of these aspects!
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask) | ||
.frame(minWidth: 200, maxWidth: 300, maxHeight: 100) | ||
.presentationCompactAdaptation(.popover) | ||
}) | ||
#endif | ||
} | ||
} |
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Code Review for ProjectTaskModifier
Pull Request
1. Redundant Presentation Modifiers
Issue:
You've added both .sheet
and .popover
modifiers for the renameTask
state:
.sheet(item: $renameTask, onDismiss: {
renameTask = nil
}, content: { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.presentationDetents([.height(200)])
})
.popover(item: $renameTask, attachmentAnchor: .point(.topLeading), content: { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.frame(minWidth: 200, maxWidth: 300, maxHeight: 100)
.presentationCompactAdaptation(.popover)
})
Recommendation:
Depending on the platform or specific conditions, you might want to present either a .sheet
or a .popover
, but not both simultaneously. This can lead to unexpected behaviors and duplicate presentations. To resolve this:
- Use Conditional Modifiers: Apply
.sheet
or.popover
based on the environment or specific conditions.
#if os(iOS)
.sheet(item: $renameTask, onDismiss: {
renameTask = nil
}) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.presentationDetents([.height(200)])
}
#else
.popover(item: $renameTask, attachmentAnchor: .point(.topLeading)) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.frame(minWidth: 200, maxWidth: 300, maxHeight: 100)
.presentationCompactAdaptation(.popover)
}
#endif
This ensures that only the appropriate presentation style is used based on the platform.
2. Consistency in Presentation Styles
Issue:
The .sheet
uses presentationDetents
with a specific height, while the .popover
uses fixed frame sizes. This inconsistency can lead to a fragmented user experience.
Recommendation:
Maintain consistency in how EditTaskNameView
is presented across different platforms. If possible, standardize the presentation sizes or make them adaptive.
// Example for standardized sizing
.sheet(item: $renameTask, onDismiss: {
renameTask = nil
}) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.frame(minHeight: 200)
}
.popover(item: $renameTask, attachmentAnchor: .point(.topLeading)) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.frame(minWidth: 200, maxWidth: 300, minHeight: 200)
}
3. Naming and Clarity
Issue:
The state variable renameTask
might be ambiguous in its purpose. It represents the task to be renamed, but the name could be clearer.
Recommendation:
Rename renameTask
to something more descriptive, such as taskToRename
. This enhances readability and clarity.
@State private var taskToRename: Todo?
And update all references accordingly:
Button {
taskToRename = task
} label: {
Text("Rename task")
}
.sheet(item: $taskToRename, onDismiss: {
taskToRename = nil
}) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.presentationDetents([.height(200)])
}
4. Handling Optional States Properly
Issue:
While you set renameTask
to nil
on dismiss, ensure that all possible dismissal paths correctly handle this to prevent stale state.
Recommendation:
Double-check that any other paths that might dismiss the EditTaskNameView
also reset taskToRename
. Consider handling this within EditTaskNameView
if applicable.
5. Avoiding Potential Memory Leaks
Issue:
Using .sheet(item:)
and .popover(item:)
with the same state variable can lead to retain cycles or memory leaks if not managed properly.
Recommendation:
Ensure that EditTaskNameView
does not strongly capture ProjectTaskModifier
. Utilize [weak self]
or other memory management techniques if needed within EditTaskNameView
.
6. Enhancing User Experience
Suggestion:
Add transition animations or visual feedback when presenting the rename interface to make the interaction smoother.
.sheet(item: $taskToRename, onDismiss: {
taskToRename = nil
}) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.presentationDetents([.height(200)])
.transition(.move(edge: .bottom))
}
7. Accessibility Considerations
Suggestion:
Ensure that EditTaskNameView
and the "Rename task" button are accessible. Add appropriate accessibility labels and traits.
Button {
taskToRename = task
} label: {
Text("Rename task")
}
.accessibilityLabel("Rename Task")
.accessibilityHint("Opens a view to rename the selected task")
8. Code Organization and Readability
Suggestion:
Consider extracting the rename functionality into a separate method or view modifier to keep body
concise. This enhances maintainability.
private func renameButton(for task: Todo) -> some View {
Button {
taskToRename = task
} label: {
Text("Rename task")
}
.accessibilityLabel("Rename Task")
.accessibilityHint("Opens a view to rename the selected task")
}
Use it within the body:
VStack {
// Existing content
renameButton(for: task)
// More content
}
Summary
- Consolidate
.sheet
and.popover
modifiers to avoid redundant presentations. - Standardize presentation styles for consistency.
- Improve naming for better clarity (
taskToRename
). - Ensure proper state handling to prevent memory leaks or stale states.
- Enhance user experience with animations and accessibility features.
- Organize code for better readability and maintainability.
Implementing these suggestions should enhance the robustness, readability, and user experience of your ProjectTaskModifier
.
@Previewable @State var task = Todo(name: "Some task") | ||
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EditTaskNameView(task: task) | ||
} |
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Thank you for submitting your EditTaskNameView.swift
for review. Below are several areas where improvements and adjustments can be made to enhance the code quality, adhere to SwiftUI best practices, and ensure future maintainability:
1. Deprecated presentationMode
Usage
Issue:
You are using @Environment(\.presentationMode)
to handle view dismissal. However, presentationMode
has been deprecated in favor of the newer dismiss
environment value.
Recommendation:
Replace @Environment(\.presentationMode)
with @Environment(\.dismiss)
. This not only aligns with current SwiftUI practices but also simplifies the dismissal process.
Revised Code:
@Environment(\.dismiss) private var dismiss
// Usage in Button action
Button("OK") {
dismiss()
}
2. Unclear @Bindable
Property Wrapper
Issue:
The @Bindable
property wrapper isn't a standard SwiftUI property wrapper. It's unclear whether this is a custom implementation or part of a specific framework.
Recommendation:
- If Custom: Ensure that
@Bindable
is correctly implemented and documented. Consider using standard property wrappers like@ObservedObject
or@StateObject
unless@Bindable
offers specific advantages. - If SwiftData: If
@Bindable
is part of the SwiftData framework, ensure it correctly integrates with the data model.
Alternative with Standard Property Wrappers:
@ObservedObject var task: Todo
3. Fixed Frame Dimensions
Issue:
Setting a fixed width and height (.frame(width: 400, height: 100)
) can lead to layout issues across different devices and accessibility settings.
Recommendation:
Use flexible sizing to accommodate various screen sizes and user preferences. Utilize SwiftUI's layout modifiers like maxWidth
, minHeight
, and adaptive layouts.
Revised Code:
.frame(maxWidth: .infinity, minHeight: 100)
.padding()
4. Lack of Input Validation
Issue:
The current implementation allows the user to dismiss the view without validating the task name. This might lead to empty or invalid task names being saved.
Recommendation:
Implement input validation to ensure that the task name isn't empty or doesn't contain invalid characters before allowing dismissal.
Possible Implementation:
@State private var isInputValid = true
var body: some View {
VStack {
TextField("Task", text: $task.name)
.onChange(of: task.name) { newValue in
isInputValid = !newValue.trimmingCharacters(in: .whitespaces).isEmpty
}
.border(isInputValid ? Color.clear : Color.red)
HStack {
Button("OK") {
if isInputValid {
dismiss()
}
}
.keyboardShortcut(.defaultAction)
.disabled(!isInputValid)
}
}
.padding()
}
5. Preview Configuration Issues
Issues:
- Unknown Property Wrapper
@Previewable
: There's no standard@Previewable
property wrapper in SwiftUI. This may cause preview failures. - Mismatch Between Property Wrappers: The view expects a
@Bindable
property, but the preview uses@State
.
Recommendations:
- Remove or Correct
@Previewable
: If@Previewable
is a custom wrapper, ensure it's correctly implemented. Otherwise, remove it and use standard@State
or appropriate wrappers. - Ensure Compatibility: Align the property wrappers in the preview with those expected by the view.
Revised Preview:
struct EditTaskNameView_Previews: PreviewProvider {
@State static var task = Todo(name: "Some task")
static var previews: some View {
EditTaskNameView(task: task)
}
}
6. Localization Considerations
Issue:
The strings "Task"
and "OK"
are hardcoded, which can hinder localization efforts.
Recommendation:
Use LocalizedStringKey
or provide localization keys to support multiple languages.
Revised Code:
TextField("task_placeholder", text: $task.name)
// In Localizable.strings
"task_placeholder" = "Task";
Button("ok_button") {
dismiss()
}
// In Localizable.strings
"ok_button" = "OK";
7. Accessibility Enhancements
Issue:
There are no accessibility modifiers or labels, which might make the view less accessible to users relying on VoiceOver or other assistive technologies.
Recommendation:
Add accessibility labels and hints to UI elements to improve usability for all users.
Revised Code:
TextField("Task", text: $task.name)
.accessibilityLabel("Task Name")
.accessibilityHint("Enter the name of the task")
Button("OK") {
dismiss()
}
.accessibilityLabel("Confirm Task Name")
8. Handling Focus and Keyboard
Issue:
There's no management of keyboard focus, which could enhance user experience by automatically focusing the text field when the view appears.
Recommendation:
Use the @FocusState
property wrapper to manage focus states, ensuring that the text field is focused when the view appears.
Revised Code:
@FocusState private var isTextFieldFocused: Bool
var body: some View {
VStack {
TextField("Task", text: $task.name)
.focused($isTextFieldFocused)
.onAppear {
DispatchQueue.main.asyncAfter(deadline: .now() + 0.5) {
isTextFieldFocused = true
}
}
HStack {
Button("OK") {
if isInputValid {
dismiss()
}
}
.keyboardShortcut(.defaultAction)
.disabled(!isInputValid)
}
}
.padding()
}
9. Ensuring Data Consistency with SwiftData
Issue:
While you import SwiftData
, it's unclear how Todo
integrates with it. Ensuring that @Bindable
correctly reflects data changes is crucial.
Recommendation:
- Verify that the
Todo
model conforms to necessary protocols (e.g.,ObservableObject
) if required bySwiftData
. - Ensure that changes made in the view are correctly persisted or reflected in the data layer.
10. Button Styling and Placement
Issue:
Currently, the "OK" button is placed inside an HStack
without additional context. If multiple buttons are anticipated in the future, the layout might become cluttered.
Recommendation:
Consider aligning the button to the trailing edge or using a Toolbar
for actions to maintain a clean and scalable interface.
Example Adjustment:
VStack {
TextField("Task", text: $task.name)
.padding()
Spacer()
Button("OK") {
dismiss()
}
.keyboardShortcut(.defaultAction)
.padding([.bottom, .trailing])
}
11. Model Initialization in Preview
Issue:
The Todo
model is initialized with only a name
. Ensure that all required properties are provided to avoid preview discrepancies.
Recommendation:
Initialize Todo
with all necessary properties or use mock data that closely resembles real use cases.
Example:
@State static var task = Todo(id: UUID(), name: "Sample Task", isCompleted: false)
12. Code Documentation and Comments
Issue:
While the file includes header comments, inline comments explaining the rationale behind certain implementations can aid future maintainers.
Recommendation:
Add comments where non-trivial logic is implemented or where future modifications might be necessary.
Example:
// Automatically focus the text field when the view appears
.onAppear {
...
}
Addressing the points above will help improve the robustness, maintainability, and user experience of your EditTaskNameView
. Ensure to test these changes thoroughly to confirm they integrate seamlessly with the rest of your application.
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask) | ||
.frame(minWidth: 200, maxWidth: 300, maxHeight: 100) | ||
.presentationCompactAdaptation(.popover) | ||
}) | ||
#endif | ||
} | ||
} |
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Your implementation introduces functionality to rename a task within the TaskRowModifier
. While the additions align with the intended feature, there are several areas where the code can be improved for better maintainability, performance, and adherence to SwiftUI best practices. Below are my observations and recommendations:
1. Redundant Presentation Modifiers
Issue:
You're attaching both .sheet
and .popover
modifiers to the same renameTask
state. This can lead to unexpected behavior, such as both presentations attempting to trigger simultaneously when renameTask
is set.
Recommendation:
Determine the context in which each presentation style should be used (e.g., .sheet
for iOS and .popover
for macOS) and conditionally apply the appropriate modifier based on the platform. SwiftUI’s @Environment
can help identify the current platform.
Example:
@Environment(\.horizontalSizeClass) var horizontalSizeClass
var body: some View {
// ... existing content
if horizontalSizeClass == .compact {
.sheet(item: $renameTask) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.presentationDetents([.height(200)])
}
} else {
.popover(item: $renameTask) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.frame(minWidth: 200, maxWidth: 300, maxHeight: 100)
.presentationCompactAdaptation(.popover)
}
}
}
2. State Management within ViewModifier
Issue:
Using @State
inside a ViewModifier
can complicate state management, especially when the modifier is reused across multiple views. It can lead to unintended state sharing or conflicts.
Recommendation:
Consider moving the state management out of the ViewModifier
and into the parent view. This approach promotes better separation of concerns and makes the modifier more reusable and testable.
Example:
struct ParentView: View {
@State private var renameTask: Todo?
var body: some View {
TaskRowModifier(renameTask: $renameTask)
.sheet(item: $renameTask) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.presentationDetents([.height(200)])
}
}
}
struct TaskRowModifier: ViewModifier {
@Binding var renameTask: Todo?
func body(content: Content) -> some View {
content
.overlay(
Button("Rename task") {
renameTask = task
}
)
}
}
3. Consistency in Presentation Detents and Adaptations
Issue:
The .sheet
uses .presentationDetents([.height(200)])
, while the .popover
uses .frame(minWidth: 200, maxWidth: 300, maxHeight: 100)
along with .presentationCompactAdaptation(.popover)
. This inconsistency can lead to varied user experiences across different devices and orientations.
Recommendation:
Standardize the presentation sizes and adaptations to ensure a consistent user experience. Utilize SwiftUI's adaptive layout features to adjust dynamically based on the environment.
Example:
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.frame(maxWidth: .infinity, maxHeight: .infinity)
.padding()
4. Accessibility Enhancements
Issue:
The newly added "Rename task" button lacks accessibility labels and traits, which can hinder users relying on VoiceOver or other assistive technologies.
Recommendation:
Enhance accessibility by providing descriptive labels and ensuring the button is easily identifiable.
Example:
Button(action: {
renameTask = task
}) {
Text("Rename task")
}
.accessibilityLabel("Rename Task Button")
.accessibilityHint("Opens a view to rename the selected task")
5. Error Handling and Data Integrity
Issue:
The renameTask
binding directly assigns the selected task without any validation or error handling. This could lead to scenarios where EditTaskNameView
receives an invalid or unexpected task.
Recommendation:
Implement validation checks before assigning to renameTask
. Additionally, ensure that EditTaskNameView
can gracefully handle any unexpected data.
Example:
Button(action: {
guard !task.isArchived else { return }
renameTask = task
}) {
Text("Rename task")
}
6. Code Duplication in Presentation Logic
Issue:
Both .sheet
and .popover
contain similar logic for presenting EditTaskNameView
. This duplication can be minimized to reduce maintenance overhead.
Recommendation:
Abstract the presentation of EditTaskNameView
into a separate view builder or function to encapsulate the shared logic.
Example:
@ViewBuilder
private func editTaskView(editTask: Todo) -> some View {
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.presentationDetents([.height(200)])
}
var body: some View {
content
// ... other modifiers
.sheet(item: $renameTask, content: editTaskView)
.popover(item: $renameTask, content: editTaskView)
}
7. Naming Conventions and Clarity
Issue:
The state variable renameTask
might be confused with the action of renaming. A more descriptive name could improve code readability.
Recommendation:
Rename renameTask
to something more indicative of its purpose, such as taskToRename
or selectedTaskForRenaming
.
Example:
@State private var taskToRename: Todo?
8. Performance Considerations
Issue:
Every time renameTask
changes, the view hierarchy might be re-evaluated, potentially leading to performance hits if the views involved are complex.
Recommendation:
Ensure that EditTaskNameView
is lightweight and consider using @Lazy
where appropriate. Additionally, profile the view to ensure there are no unnecessary recomputations.
9. Ensuring Data Consistency
Issue:
After renaming a task, there’s no explicit update mechanism shown in the provided snippet to reflect the changes in the tasks
array.
Recommendation:
Ensure that EditTaskNameView
communicates the updated task back to the tasks
array, possibly using bindings or a delegate pattern.
Example:
.sheet(item: $taskToRename) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask) { updatedTask in
if let index = tasks.firstIndex(where: { $0.id == updatedTask.id }) {
tasks[index] = updatedTask
}
}
}
10. Documentation and Comments
Issue:
While the code adds new functionality, there are no comments explaining the purpose or usage of the new components, which can be helpful for future maintenance.
Recommendation:
Add concise comments to explain the purpose of renameTask
and the rationale behind using both .sheet
and .popover
if necessary.
Example:
// State variable to hold the task selected for renaming
@State private var taskToRename: Todo?
// Presents the EditTaskNameView when a task is selected for renaming
.sheet(item: $taskToRename) { editTask in
EditTaskNameView(task: editTask)
.presentationDetents([.height(200)])
}
By addressing these points, you can enhance the robustness, readability, and user experience of your TaskRowModifier
. Ensuring clear state management, consistent presentation logic, and accessibility will make your codebase more maintainable and user-friendly.
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} | ||
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"Repead every" : { | ||
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Pull Request Review: Addition of "Rename task" Localization
1. Localization Key Naming Convention
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Issue: The key
"Rename task"
is a user-facing string. -
Suggestion: Utilize a unique identifier (e.g.,
"rename_task"
) instead of the actual display text. This approach enhances maintainability, especially when the display text changes or needs to support multiple languages."rename_task": { "localizations": { ... } }
2. Consistency in Localization Structure
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Issue: Ensure that the structure you're using (
"localizations"
→ language code →"stringUnit"
) is consistent across all localization entries in the project. -
Suggestion: If not already standardized, consider adopting a uniform structure for all localization entries. This facilitates easier management and parsing.
3. Handling the "state"
Property
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Issue: The
"state"
property is set to"translated"
. It's important to ensure that this property is effectively utilized throughout the application. -
Suggestions:
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Enum Usage: If
"state"
can have multiple values (e.g.,"translated"
,"pending"
,"needs_review"
), consider defining an enum to manage possible states. This reduces the risk of typos and improves code readability.enum LocalizationState: String, Codable { case translated case pending case needsReview = "needs_review" }
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Validation: Implement validation to ensure that the
"state"
values conform to the expected enum cases. This can prevent inconsistent states that might lead to UI issues.
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4. Language Coverage
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Issue: Currently, only English (
"en"
) and Russian ("ru"
) localizations are provided. -
Suggestions:
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Scalability: If the application targets a broader audience, consider planning for additional languages. Implementing a scalable approach to add more localizations in the future will save time and effort.
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Fallback Mechanism: Ensure there's a fallback mechanism in place (e.g., defaulting to English) if a particular localization is missing for a user's preferred language.
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5. JSON Formatting and Syntax
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Issue: Inserting new entries within a JSON structure requires careful handling of commas to maintain valid syntax.
-
Suggestion: Verify that the addition of the
"Rename task"
block maintains correct JSON formatting. For instance, if"Rename task"
is added before"Repead every"
, ensure that the previous entry ends with a comma to separate the objects properly.}, // Ensure this comma exists "Rename task": { ... }, "Repead every": { ... }
6. Typographical Error in Existing Entry
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Issue: The existing key
"Repead every"
likely contains a typo and should be"Repeat every"
. -
Suggestion: Correct the typo to maintain professionalism and avoid confusion across different language localizations.
- "Repead every" : { + "Repeat every" : { "localizations": { ... } }
Note: Since this isn't part of the added code, ensure to address it separately or in a different pull request to keep changes organized.
7. Documentation and Comments
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Issue: Lack of comments explaining the purpose of the new localization entry.
-
Suggestion: Add comments or update documentation to indicate where and how the
"rename_task"
key is used within the application. This aids future developers in understanding the context and usage.// Used in the task management section for renaming operations "rename_task": { "localizations": { ... } }
8. Automated Localization Checks
- Suggestion: Implement automated tests or linting rules to validate localization files. This can catch issues like missing translations, incorrect state values, or formatting errors early in the development process.
9. Use of Localization Tools
- Suggestion: Consider leveraging localization management tools (e.g., SwiftGen, Lokalise) to streamline the handling of localization strings. These tools can generate type-safe code, reduce manual errors, and integrate with translation workflows.
10. Performance Considerations
-
Issue: If the localization files become large, there might be performance implications when parsing them at runtime.
-
Suggestion: Monitor the size and structure of localization files. Optimize by loading only necessary parts or using efficient parsing strategies to maintain app performance.
Summary
The addition of the "Rename task"
localization is a valuable enhancement. To ensure robustness and maintainability:
- Adopt consistent and meaningful key naming conventions.
- Ensure structural consistency across all localization entries.
- Validate and manage the
"state"
property effectively. - Address existing typographical errors.
- Enhance documentation and consider integrating localization tools and automated checks.
Implementing these suggestions will contribute to a more scalable and maintainable localization strategy within your Swift/SwiftUI project.
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